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[unbrokenhours]

I finally finished.
After asking for some nice help ^.^

It's an English visual novel

Download (approx: 130 mb)[/b]
http://unbrokenhours.com/frozenessence/download.html

About:
In a world balanced by essence, a girl is unsealed from her crystal prison. With no recollection of anything. Much of the world is new to her, not to mention people are after her. Whether she finds her way out of this or finds love, it's up to the player to decide her fate. With the guidance and protection from the bodyguards and the oracle within her realm, her journey begin.

Genre: Fantasy, otome (gxb), visual novel

Rating: Teen, with minor blood and violence

Features
12+ different endings
75+ CGs
Original sound track (22 custom made songs)
4 guys to end up with + 1 hidden character (reminder, no yuri, no yaoi!)
Approx: 60 mins - 80 mins per path. It depends on how fast you read.


Mina
The main character without a memory (sounds cliche, eh? ). The player will decide her fate with the choices that come up.

Guys (in order by the images)

Rune
Rune is laid back, but he is serious bodyguard. He's quite protective and most things don't seem to affect him.

Caius
Caius is quite chaotic, and seems to enjoy the misery of others for some reason. He's the more unpredictable bodyguard who does as he pleases.

Aurelius
A charming, polite and famous soldier comes from another land. He is optimistic, and he loves his ladies.

Varian
A very serious man who doesn't seem to stop working. Not much is known about him and his mood is quite grim at times.

+ Hidden Character

Screenshots




I also don't know how to change the 78% under the topic title. o.O

[Tamarei]

wow the images look pretty polished. what program did you use to make the game? did you do it all yourself? impressive.

about the characters, all 4 of them look kinda...cold. was expecting aurelius to be smiling actually. caius seems to be more of my type LOL

[Harroe]

I'd like to try playing this. Your art is pretty nice, although I'll have to play it to see whether I like the story or not.

The game summary could probably use some polishing. It doesn't feel like it's catchy enough to me. If I was to purely decide based on the summary, I wouldn't be drawn to the game. Summary isn't necessarily an indicator so that's why I want to play anyway, but there are a lot of people who care much more than I do. This is only meant as some constructive criticism so I hope I haven't come off rude. I appreciate that people put these things together and would never want to stop them from doing this. I think your art is good and the character summaries also gave a clear picture as to the type of character each guy is. I look forward to the games completion.

[unbrokenhours]

Don't worry. I can polish the summary up, or just take stuff out. Constructive criticism is good. It means I won't be stuck on one spot forever. I would believe most people like and care about summaries, though I will polish up the summary before it's released.

all 4 of them look kinda...cold. was expecting aurelius to be smiling actually

Oh, those are neutral expressions. I just didn't use their smiling pics. XD
Cold? Hmmm. I'll keep in mind that people tend to like warmth more.

The program I use? I'm not a very good programmer, so it'd be a miracle for me to pull something off from scratch. I use a tool that you guys probably already heard of (renpy). There's still a lot to do. *Goes back to work.*

[Savvy]

I like what you're doing here! I especially like the look of Caius. Hawt.

The only thing that kind of got me was when reading the descriptions of the portraited dudes I read Aurelius as a charming soldier and ladies man. When I looked back up at the picture I was like, "srsly?"

It's probably just because of the way the image is cropped, but it looks like he's wearing a sailor uniform, so I was getting a little boyish vibe from him instead. Either way though I can't wait to play!

[Rabi-en-rose]

Your game looks great I can't wait for the day it's released, I'm all excited now.

[unbrokenhours]

I finished a while back. First post is updated with information. Please have fun.