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#1 chocochell

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Posted 31 January 2010 - 04:15 AM

Hi! Some of you might remember my other novel that I completed here on the Neo Forum here and I'm back trying my hand at writing fantasy-romance now.

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Do let me know what you think :) Oh, and the story is in first person mostly, it's just that I wanted to include a fairytale-like beginning to the story in my character's past.

#2 litewolf

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Posted 31 January 2010 - 02:50 PM

You started it! >w<

Loved the prologue, it felt fantasy enough without overdoing it. Hope to read the story itself soon ^^

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#3 chocochell

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Posted 01 February 2010 - 01:00 PM

You're the best, litewolf :D

I'm done with Chapter 1, and I'm too lazy to edit the first post (LOL) so here it is!

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Oh, and you might notice some extremely Italian terms because I am too lazy to create my own terms so I 'borrowed' from the Italian language ;D Especially the flowers and stuff.

The beauty of creating my own world, apparently!

#4 litewolf

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Posted 01 February 2010 - 05:11 PM

First again? I feel like your stalker XD
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#5 chocochell

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Posted 02 February 2010 - 02:59 PM

LOLOL well I think if it weren't for you this topic would slide way down and I'd be all @___@ so it's a good thing you're there or I'd be all . . . this topic will never get updated :D I promise sincerely to acknowledge you when I am a fully-fledged published writer *coughIhopecough*

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I'm also writing another story while I write this (well, when boredom takes over) and I think I like sarcastic people very much for some reason LOL.

#6 litewolf

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Posted 06 February 2010 - 07:40 AM

By all means do let me know *cough* XD
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Wow, you're working hard, you have another story already ^^;

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Posted 26 February 2010 - 06:28 PM

Yes another story from chocochell-san!! I love your previous story and this one is great as well! Looking forward to the rest of the chapters!
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