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#21 Hazuki

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 02:14 AM

Whoa...that's fast! LOL
I love Jed... but if I met him I know I'd be fighting with him too. LOL
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Posted 02 May 2009 - 02:59 AM

Lol~ fast as in? Story flow? I actually think I'm behind ~~ And I might have to expand that planned 12 - 13 chapters slightly xD

I'm working on Of Love & Lyrics all weekend *ignores pile of games, books and various other media* so Chapter 6 should be up in the next 3 - 4 days *hopefully*

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#23 Hazuki

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 08:55 PM

I meant...you kind of posted this fast. :x
I was surprised that you had chapter 4 done already. ^^;

I know who you based Jed on...it's so obvious LOL

I wonder what the president is like.... (I hope he's young and handsome though LOL)

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 08:20 AM

Awwwwwww Kazuya <33 XDD
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#25 chocochell

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Posted 05 May 2009 - 11:17 AM

Lol if I ever become a published author may I please have you as my editor litewolf xDDD

Thanks; off to make changes now.

Oh and Hazuki I'm afraid the president will be a disappointment in regards of the two things you mentioned. . . . but there's a surprise regarding him anyway :D

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Well, here's the sixth chapter up. Less Lucy's Wish in this chapter, unfortunately, but more information on them, all the same!

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Posted 05 May 2009 - 03:55 PM

I very doubt I could be your editor since I'm not native XD

I guess this is what they call transition chapter ^^ Short enough to keep attention span, long enough to move the story on :3

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Posted 05 May 2009 - 10:07 PM

...with a conversation like that I think the prez would be handsome LOL
the line he said when he left...it would floor me too! XD

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Posted 06 May 2009 - 04:31 AM

@ litewolf : Huzzah, no typos this time round? LOL. Oh well who knows what happens one day in the future. . . *gazes at useless crystal ball that shows nothing*

@ Hazuki : HAHAHAHAHAHAHA well if you say so LOL. If he's handsome, he's handsome (and distinguished) !

Next chapter's about the reappearance of the ex-best friend and semi-ex-boyfriend. Hope to write some 'in-your-face!' sequences xDDD

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Posted 08 May 2009 - 02:01 AM

yay!!! i love the next few chapters. Especially the interactions between kazuya and lucia plus...plus the part about jed and tanaka purposely teasing kazuya about lucia...he likes her already ohohohoho...
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Posted 11 May 2009 - 09:02 AM

Thanks, moonlight... ^^ But I would say that Kazuya is pretty dense in the romance department. Lol.

And I am proud to present Chapter 7. Finally. All spotted typos and grammar mistakes welcomed to be commented on as usual xDDDD And story flow, of course.

I am now off to do Chapter 8. @@

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Posted 11 May 2009 - 12:14 PM

Awww when you said they were going to appear I was hoping it wouldn't be at the very end...like you did instead >D

And a couple of typos, this time you aren't off XD
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 07:24 AM

argh...chapter 7 left me hanging!!!! haha now i absolutely can't wait for chapter 8 to be out...i just wonder how exactly is lucia going to handle the situation with her ex-es though >.<
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 02:31 PM

LOL you really inserted them there...
Well, I'm hoping to see how the reunion goes and if our heroine will start calling some people by name... XD

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Posted 12 May 2009 - 02:41 PM

@ litewolf : Aww, gomen, litewolf! Sometimes I think I would be able to fit some things in, but then my words run away with me and I have to shuffle them off to the next chapter.

Thanks for the typo spotting, even though I know you are busy with work *grateful mode*

And here's my ultimate proof of thanks . . .

Chapter 8, today! xDDDD

I spent all day typing as well. I think I'm getting better at fitting more words in a day, plus it helps that I really like this story lol. The story flow keeps surprising me.


@moonlight. . . : Lol, no need to wonder. Chapter 8 is here! xDDD

P.S. One question to ALL Of Love & Lyrics readers, yes even the lurkers.

IF Of Love & Lyrics is an anime/game, who do you think would be best to voice our five main heroes (Japanese seiyuus, of course)? By the way, this is how they 'sound' in my head when I type the story, so I thought maybe you guys would like to know.

The thoughts in the spoiler are who I think will be perfect for some. I would suggest not opening my spoiler in case I influence you, but here. xD

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Now that I look I seem to be pretty influenced by La Corda d' Oro. @@

EDIT : LOL HAZUKI YOU JUST MISSED ME AND MY UPDATE! xDDD

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Posted 12 May 2009 - 08:23 PM

You're welcome~ Since I go through it, it's not much of trouble ^^

And even if I'm dead tired from work, I couldn't help but read the update ASAP XD
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And typos 8D
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And now off to seiyuu land X3
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Posted 12 May 2009 - 11:22 PM

@ litewolf : Hmm, I get what you mean now in the cold light of morning and I'm not typing into the middle of the night lol.

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EDIT: I have done the 2nd draft of chapter 8, for your viewing pleasure. More drawn-out, more soap-opera than ever, and a whole lot of running away.

You know, now that I write these things down, I find that certain 'drama' don't fit in text. Like I base Kimi and Satoshi on real people that I have known, but people like that just drifted apart instead of finding closure.

@ litewolf:
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And your seiyuu list . . .

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Posted 13 May 2009 - 09:28 AM

EDIT: I have done the 2nd draft of chapter 8, for your viewing pleasure. More drawn-out, more soap-opera than ever, and a whole lot of running away.

You know, now that I write these things down, I find that certain 'drama' don't fit in text. Like I base Kimi and Satoshi on real people that I have known, but people like that just drifted apart instead of finding closure.

@ litewolf:

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I did as you thought I would and just read the 'new' part, and I have to say, I liked it a lot more ^^ Hope you don't mind if I wait ch9 before making a final judgement so I can go and read again both ch8 and 9 (and note the typos I saw but forgot to mark down OTL Don't have time to re-read it now).
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Posted 13 May 2009 - 09:48 AM

@ litewolf :

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My old Chapter 8 is still on FP, however, if anyone is interested. I myself kinda like the new Chapter 8, because it lets me write some scenes in Chapter 9 *cough* I'm not going to change that until I've gotten some more opinions on MNR.

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Posted 13 May 2009 - 12:29 PM

i cant wait to see what will happen in chapter 9 O_O
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Posted 13 May 2009 - 05:18 PM

Hmm, well, I've finally just finished Chapter 9, please do read and tell me if any of the scenes seem to have something off.

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Plus I didn't check for typos/grammar in Chapter 9, so . . take it away, typo-spotters. Which would most probably mean litewolf, I guess. Thanks so much =D

P.S. Took away the old Chapter 8 from my FP as well, though not uploaded the new ones yet. Wanted to see what the*put emphasis here* friendlier Netizens had to say on my new version of the story first. I await your input =3




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