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#1 chocochell

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Posted 29 December 2008 - 02:01 PM

Over the past few days I've been writing and typing, and here is chapter 01, the first in a planned series of 12 - 13 chapters. Hopefully.

Please do comment, your comments would vary the outcome of the story. icon_smile.gif

Guests may comment on my FP account here, under the story Of Love and Lyrics. Feel free to check out, as of this moment, my only other story lol.

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I would say that the story is rated M, just in case. ^^

Here's the first chapter.

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EDIT : JANUARY 3rd 2009 : CHAPTER 2

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EDIT: APRIL 6th 2009: CHAPTER 3

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EDIT : APRIL 23rd 2009 : CHAPTER 4

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EDIT : MAY 1st 2009 : CHAPTER 5

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EDIT : MAY 5th 2009 : CHAPTER 6

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EDIT : MAY 11th 2009 : CHAPTER 7

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EDIT : MAY 13th 2009 : CHAPTER 8

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EDIT : MAY 14th 2009 : CHAPTER 9

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EDIT : MAY 15th 2009 : CHAPTER 10

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EDIT : MAY 16th 2009 : CHAPTER 11

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EDIT : MAY 21th 2009 : CHAPTER 12

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EDIT : MAY 23rd 2009 : CHAPTER 13

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EDIT : MAY 26rd 2009 : CHAPTER 14

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EDIT : MAY 27th 2009 : CHAPTER 15

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EDIT : MAY 30th 2009 : CHAPTER 16

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EDIT : JUNE 2nd 2009 : CHAPTER 17

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EDIT : JUNE 7th 2009 : CHAPTER 18

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EDIT : JUNE 13th 2009 : CHAPTER 19

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EDIT : JUNE 16nd 2009 : CHAPTER 20

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EDIT : JUNE 22nd 2009 : CHAPTER 21

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#2 litewolf

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Posted 29 December 2008 - 02:40 PM

I have to get accustomed with your writing style, but I like the girl and that's enough to look forward to your next chapter :D
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Depending on where she's originally from, she might not have broken visa rules. I know I can go to Japan and stay there up to 90 days without visa so there might be other countries too. But I'd need one if I were to work there or stay longer.

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Posted 30 December 2008 - 07:52 AM

I never really thought of where she came from, really. I just thought it was time for a story based in Japan with a gaijin girl instead of the other round, lol.

As for visas, I was thinking that she would be there on a two year study program basis, and since she mentioned she did hers halfway, she would still technically have a student visa for one more year, and needs that one year to find enough money to fly home (far, far away lol) before she's an illegal immigrant. Or something.

Oh, and thank you for commenting on the story ^^ I didn't really expect any *cough* I think I was thinking of Twilight when I typed that, lol.

P.S. Is that . . . Kristoph Gavin in your picture? *eyes goggles* Technically I know deep down I'm not supposed to like him, but . . . he's cute. ^^

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Posted 30 December 2008 - 04:48 PM

P.S. Is that . . . Kristoph Gavin in your picture? *eyes goggles* Technically I know deep down I'm not supposed to like him, but . . . he's cute. ^^

Yes he is 8D Sorry for late reply, but I wanted to finish the game before replying
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 12:05 PM

I like this. I dunno but your writing style is slightly similar to my casual and not lazy/rushed (not school-work) stories.

I like the main character and I'd like to see an update. ( I myself would be too lazy if I was in your position though since I'm too lazy)

Eh is it that often people make characteres from Japan rather than foreign? Maybe I don't read that much full fanfics (most tend to be oneshots - laziness referenced)

M-rated? Eh. I'll keep reading. XD Too interested now.

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Posted 06 April 2009 - 03:57 PM

Thank you for your kind words. I wasn't planning to write in here until I updated the 2nd chapter >.< But I feared I would seem rude, lol.

My style of writing is vastly influenced by Meg Cabot and Diana Wynne Jones, my favorite authors, so yeah. If you read Princess Diaries you might see something in there that's slightly similar to what I'm writing.

I'm lazy too! <-------- says this like it's something to be proud of. Lol.

But I'm trying hard to finish a novel or two by the end of this year. It's in my resolutions, lol, which I wrote up and stuck Post-It stickers on my mirror so that I'm reminded everyday. Can't slack off this year like I did last year, lol.

Which is why I'm working on two novels simultaneously. I think Chapter 2 for Of Love & Lyrics will be up later on today. Tomorrow, at the latest.

Um, as for the fanfics, I don't know, because I never read any (except kaho's works on the MNR, lol, way back before I even realized that visual novels existed and yes, that you can change the character's name to your own, orz).

I just thought it would be fun for a rising rock band to meet foreign student who doesn't really care who they are, lol, since she's into the music scene overseas (westlife, bach, il divo, haha)

As for the M-Rated *mischievous grin* I would say it's more. . . suggestive? Hahahaha.

P.S. Kristoph sometimes remind me of Kyoya from Ouran. Lol.

EDIT : Chapter 2 updated. It's 1500 words more than Chapter 1, orz. Comments welcomed, as usual!

EDIT: Chapter 3 updated. Out of curiosity, to the people who are reading this, who do you think Lucia should end up with, now 3 chapters into the story? I plan to write more chapters involving her and the other guys, to give them all a balanced act.

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Posted 06 April 2009 - 04:48 PM

First of all: Sorry, I seem to have missed the previous update OTL

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Posted 07 April 2009 - 12:29 AM

Haha...things are interesting
I didn't expect one of them to move in that fast though! O_o;

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Posted 07 April 2009 - 02:16 AM

KAZUYAAA KENJIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IS MY CHOICE!! ;D

ahaha this is a good story, i like your style of writing and the plot. i like how sarcastic lucia can be, it cracks me up xD
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#10 chocochell

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Posted 07 April 2009 - 02:33 AM

Oh, I LURVE you guys =) Thanks for inspiring me to write more xD

@ litewolf - thank you for pointing them out, I reread my chapters many times but STILL manage to make a mistake here and there. =.=

P.S. I like all of the guys. Lol. I can kind of imagine myself, after writing the generic ones, write romance for all of them. Kinda like a visual novel. Pick one route. LOL.

@Hazuki - Well I pictured Touya as a somewhat Ichinose Takumi-type from Nana. Perhaps that will help? xD

@kandyse : Haha well I figured that he would be the first choice for most people - I like him too, but I feel I must give the rest a chance. Obligation. LOL. Maybe after a few more chapters involving the other guys they could be your first choice.

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Posted 07 April 2009 - 10:44 AM

oooh this is a very interesting story!!! my guess is that she will fall for kenji and that he himself, the drummer and maybe touya will fall for her. This should be interesting!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Posted 08 April 2009 - 12:59 AM

i like the younger brother, kouhei, as well xD

make it a love triangle or something >_>;; hahah
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#13 chocochell

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Posted 23 April 2009 - 11:15 AM

Well, here's an extra long chapter 4 for all of Of Love & Lyrics readers ^^

I'm guessing if you like plot twists, yeah well the one at the end might get people to goggle '@@' a bit.

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Posted 23 April 2009 - 01:23 PM

Ahahahah, one down I guess? XDDD
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Posted 23 April 2009 - 02:22 PM

Ooh, noted. Thank you, litewolf.

Haha yeah maybe one down but who knows someone could change his mind xDDD I'm thinking of more plot twists xD

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Posted 23 April 2009 - 10:07 PM

Oh...thank you like always...
I like the way things go here...

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#17 chocochell

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Posted 24 April 2009 - 02:57 AM

Noted, thank you!

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Posted 27 April 2009 - 06:12 AM

@chocochell
I just read your story, it's really good I like it a lot and look forward to more.
I'm surprised I didn't see it earlier but I'm kind of glad I didn't since I got to read four chapters in a row^^
I like the brothers and the drummer the most. But if the drummer already has a girl I would prefer them to stay together. I'm not a fan of affair romances, but that's just me.

Keep up the good work :D
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Posted 28 April 2009 - 06:39 AM

Ah I just caught up by... quite a few chapters. Well 2 anyway.

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#20 chocochell

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Posted 01 May 2009 - 05:10 PM

Thank you Xeiran and lilinnocence - I guess everyone's interested in Yoshida's fiancee xD But she wouldn't appear until much later - and well you'll see ^^

I was thinking of having both the makeover and president together in the same chapter but the makeover chapter became so long I decided to make it a separate chapter lol~

Chapter 5 turned out to be more of a Jed and Lucia struggle than I thought it would be xD

Anyway, enjoy!




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